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Old May 6th, 2009 (9:36 AM).
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I like that idea a lot, Solovino. I just love how you mixed a lot of elements like watchers of ruins, organizations, and a tournament together. Me likey. True, mixing too many things in one story can make it confusing, but if done right, it'll be epic. The only minor criticism is the Pokemon being the leaders of the organization. I love the twist, but more background info on that, like how and why the Pokemon are the leaders in the first place. Er, does that make sense? ;

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