Thread: [Pokémon] Mentor (PG-14)
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Old May 8th, 2009 (10:55 AM).
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Sola84
I'm just a ray of sunshine
 
Join Date: May 2009
Location: In my head
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Nature: Relaxed
I'm loving the story so far! You drew me in from the get go and I really liked when Leah was in the old mansion and the floors creaked, making her think there was someone there when it fact it was the floor ready to cave in, very good writing drawing the reader away from any other conclusion except Leah's.

Can't wait to read more :D
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