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May 10th, 2009 (08:59 PM).
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: In my dreams.
Hey, delongbi, thanks for reviewing and catching that mistake.
Anywho, I just got caught up. Nice chapters. The battle with the gym leader seemed very practical. Actually, your take on Pokemon is a very practical one in general. All of this seems like it could actually happen if there were really Pokemon in the world so good job.
Heh, I strive for realism. Who need flashy battles when they can be won by much simpler methods? (Though I admit, the flashy battles are always the ones that are much more fun to write. <_<)
Haha, Leah got thrown off a boat. =)
Ooh, and I liked Leah's background story. Can't wait to find out more about her!
Yeah, my poor characters. And their bad luck is only just starting.
I’m glad you liked Leah’s back-story and maybe more of her past will pop up again some time soon.
"After being saddled with two ten-year-old brats and being sent out on her long overdue Pokemon journey, she can’t help but wonder… is it worth it?"
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