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Old May 30th, 2009, 08:30 AM
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Bards Sword
La Resistance!
 
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Israel!!
Gender: Male
Nature: Rash
The one question I have for you is: Why is your plot special? Currently, it sounds like the basic "young kid tares down syndicate" plot. What is the syndicate's goals? And why is your game special? I'm not trying to be cruel or anything, but asking yourself those questions will result in your game being much better.
Me, I hang around the game development sections, giving plot advice and whatnot.

KYLE: If you don't show Muhammad, then you've made a distinction what is okay to poke fun at, and what isn't. Either it's all okay, or none of it is.

And on the pedestal these words appear:
"My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!"
Nothing beside remains.


MACBETH: I will not yield
To kiss the ground before young Malcom's feet
And to be baited with the rabble's curse
Though Birnam Wood be come to Dunsinane
And thou opposed, being of no woman born
Yet I will try the last. Before my body
I throw my warlike shield. Lay on, Macduff
And damned be he that first cries, "Hold, enough!"