This is one of the best stories I have ever read, and Im not being generic. I have read a lot of good horror in my time, but never something as well thought out and well written as this. You should seriously consider making a human version of this and finding someone to publish it. Im still in shock that I was able to read something as good as this online. Please write more soon!
Also, I started to cry alot. Thats how good it is. I never cry when I read horror. Never.