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Old June 19th, 2009 (02:18 PM).
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http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex8-31.png
I like this one, though the spikes on the tail don't really look right... Maybe they have too dark of an outline?


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex9-14.png
These...are a little scary The magkid is actually really good, props to you on that one, Elactamar's head is a little...off, I don't know how to explain it, Just about everything on Electimortar is bad, no offense, but the stripes just don't look right, the arms don't look like they're in a natural position, the shading is a little weird, and those round antennae things look 2D.


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex6-26.png
This one would look better if it didn't have those hands, IMO. Better than anything I could do, though

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex1-46.png
I don't really like this one at all, it all looks 2D except for the head.

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex2-28.png
Best sprite so far, I don't see anything wrong with it at first glance


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex7-15.png
This one...creeps me out. It looks kinda flat and the arms are completely different sizes.

-sorry about color.
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex8-21.png
This one is way too busy. The color is fine, but there's way too much stuff on it


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex8-19.png
There's really nothing wrong with this, other than the fact that it looks a little weird


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex8-18.png
I love this one, though I see a few minor outlining issues


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex6-22.png
Again, a little too busy, and the shading on the main body doesn't look very natural


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex6-19.png
I've seen worrse, though, again, the shading doesn't look very natural. Don't try so hard to get it right.


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex5-16.png
...


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex3-18.jpg
What is it, exactly?


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex3-19.jpg
No, just...no

-this one is AWESOME.
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...is/alex8-9.jpg
It is pretty cool, though the arms look like they'd fall off at any moment


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex4-17.jpg
I really don't know what to say about this...

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex6-14.jpg
This one looks really bad, and it is way too short.


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex5-15.jpg
This is why you never interrupt a ditto when it is transforming...


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex2-24.jpg
Not TERRRIBLE, but not amazing either. Very cute though, not much else to say...


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...is/alex8-8.jpg
No comment


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex6-13.jpg
I absolutely love this on, I don't see anything wrong with it


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex4-16.jpg
Another shading issue, and don't use that much dithering

-still ghost and flying lol.
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex10-6.jpg
A little bland, but that cloud is really annoying me. Go with a lighter outline.

-it's... A roboooot(Spongebob episode "Krab Borg")
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...is/alex8-7.jpg
The outline on this one doesn't really look right...

-Nyoxys! Dun dun dun! It will kill you! ..........................It stinks, I know...
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...is/alex8-6.png
This one seriously burns my eyes, tone it down a little, please

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex2-17.jpg
The neck on this one looks like...well...it looks like the bones are bigger around than everything else in the neck

-12 pokemon fusion! Woo!
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex3-14.jpg
Stick with simple fusions for now...


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex7-10.jpg
It's...cute?


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex1-23.jpg
This gets another no


http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...s/alex2-15.jpg
[b]This really creeps me out. It prbably wouldn't even happen in the Pokemon world
Comments in the spoiler. I couldn't be bothered to comment on all of them, but the overall look for these is work on your shading and anatomy.
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