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Old July 4th, 2009 (03:56 PM).
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The tiles look pretty nice, like them. and the story flow seems to fit, but i see one minor error if you didnt fix it yet. between winterflow city and route 1 in the last screens it goes so quickly from a cold climate with snow to a warm climate. I would say make it blend it more. Just a suggestion.
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