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Old July 5th, 2009 (04:10 AM).
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Citrinin
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How you have not received any reviews for this yet, I don't know. Due to time constraints and me being not on my best game due to Late Night Syndrome, I'll be reviewing the prologue only for now.

And it was spectacular. Your narrative voice was incredible: effectively and confidently portraying the cycle of disaster with the perfect mix of suspense and description. Your grammar was perfect as far as I could see (but then again, I may have missed something due to it being late at night). I quite like dark settings, so I suppose I'm a little biased in that respect, but all-in-all, I really enjoyed it.
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