View Single Post
  #5    
Old July 23rd, 2009 (03:24 PM).
Relith's Avatar
Relith Relith is offline
Togepi
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Albany, Ny
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Nature: Calm
Posts: 98
Usually I'll describe objects better than the people. Like...for instance

The ghostly moon approaches the abandoned castle.

Most times I forget to describe what the characters are doing.
I gotta remember to take my time, lol
Reply With Quote