[HotM May] POKEMON FLORA SKY (Final Version Available!)
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August 3rd, 2009, 03:06 AM
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Kwun Tong Mountains
Here are some Grammatical Mistakes/Bugs I've found:
Pic 1: It should be: I don't want it.
Pic 2: The "i" is not "I".
Pic 3: It should be: Now, try to be a Trainer and battle me.
Pic 4: You can walk through that tree.
Pic 5: No music, and the text isn't changed yet. Why? I've thought that Wally's going to teach you how to catch Pokemon, instead of asking you on how to catch it.
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I am now an anime dubber, cover singer and a fan of anime. I can still apply as a translator and grammar corrector, though.
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