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Old August 4th, 2009 (07:10 AM).
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I think that I have read this before, but you made some changes didn't you?
And I'm still wondering what Pokemon does Arthur have xD

Anyway, I can only say keep writing. I won't say anything about grammar and that stuff 'cause I think you write very well, besides I don't know that much about grammar xD

The description on Pallet Town was very good to me, is exactly what I imagine on the little town
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