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[HotM May] POKEMON FLORA SKY (Final Version Available!)
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August 5th, 2009, 02:09 AM
Sarcastic Prince
Starting anew...
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Kwun Tong Mountains
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Nature: Timid
I've found more Spelling and Grammactical Mistakes:
Pic 1: It should be: You can visit my house, it's near here.
Pic 2: It should be: Go away! Team Magma is working here.
Pic 3: It should be Umm... you don't have a Gym Badge yet. All right.
Pic 4: The Girl walks away when you talk to her.
Pic 5: The "i" is not "I" again.
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