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Old August 5th, 2009, 07:55 PM
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Cykes
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Canada, BC
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Just downloaded and gave the demo a run.

I like it, but there are some things I would consider changing. At times what you have to do is vague and unclear, and you have some grammar errors. But this is a start. Your mapping needs a few adjustments, mostly on the interiors actually. Long stretched hallways aren't really necessary.
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