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August 9th, 2009, 06:38 AM
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Kansas City
Well that had lots of humor.
Several times I spotted mistakes with Mew's dialogue. I am not sure if this was done on purpose, or if to speak like Yoda, you intended.
Other than that, that was a great chapter, I really like how you did Mew's playfulness.
I could go on forever about how/what I liked about it, but I don't have the time to type that today. So I'll just leave it at that for now.
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