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Old August 9th, 2009 (6:38 AM).
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Well that had lots of humor.

Several times I spotted mistakes with Mew's dialogue. I am not sure if this was done on purpose, or if to speak like Yoda, you intended.

Other than that, that was a great chapter, I really like how you did Mew's playfulness.

I could go on forever about how/what I liked about it, but I don't have the time to type that today. So I'll just leave it at that for now.
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