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Old August 10th, 2009, 03:32 PM
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Azumi
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: SE.RA.PH
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Nature: Hasty
:O Shinji plushie = WANT

Your sprites are great! I especially love the others part (er... Jun and Shinji fan here?) because I really like plushies and those are my favourite characters (other than Lucian XD), so... it's excellent!

Also, in this...

The fire kinda irks me... Maybe it's how the tail goes straight up, or the parts near the tail looks too fat...
Well, the anatomy irks me. It looks like Figer is too fat? I suggest leaning it a bit...
(Or maybe I'm wrong. If that is, tell me.)

...that's all I have to say. No crit because I have no experience in these aspects... *sighs*
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