I'm going to have to degrade the mess out of your hack... Yeah, joking
Well, I love your titlescreen, did you make the Dragonite in photoshop? And the story seemed pretty solid and interesting to me. Your hack will turn out to be a great one, filled with events and adventures and whatnot, you know, things that'll keep people interested. Okay, well good luck with it, and can't wait to see more!