Thread: [Pokémon] Spring's Revenge
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Old September 18th, 2009 (10:48 AM).
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Quote originally posted by Crazy Packers Fan:
The end is near, isn't it? Let's go into what I liked and didn't like about this chapter.
If you call about 5 chapters 'near'...that's about how many chapters are left. XD!
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Liked: The love triangle that has Sabrina on the outside of Will and Karen. Not that I've got anything against Sabrina or anything... It's just fun to watch.
*No*, of course not....
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Didn't like: The lack of violence when Salamance attacked Sabrina. Come on, P*A, we can handle a little violence here and there. Even if it means Sabrina's back getting RIPPED APART!
>> Now, could I kill my main character before the story's over? Seriously...
You *will* get violence *hinthinthint*, and it will involve Sabrina. In both ways.
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Hated: The "weak" side of Cynthia shown at the end of the chapter. I don't like seeing my Cynthia show her weaknesses.
...my Cynthia has her weak sides, too. You'll see them, you'll see them...she's not as perfect as she claims.
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Of course I enjoyed the chapter, don't get me wrong. So, when do you want me to write the next chapter of my story?
As soon as it's ready? =3
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