Well here it is.
Thanks for your critique
:\Alright I messed it all up while creating a good story. But I did my best. I am always nervous to see what you gonna tell about my work. I am not so good at stories, but I am at mapping.
There are a few things people arent great at. I dont mess up maps just like begginers PokéHackers do. So I could call some friends over so we can work on my old hack.
The hack may be finished next year I think.
And I think you may play it and like it I think not gonna happen do you know so? Good night then.
Im sleepy and lazy now. See ya tomorrow!