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Old January 5th, 2010 (09:56 PM).
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TBH, that's a pretty generic plotline (particularly the beginning), and you're being pretty vague about any of the other details.

Quote originally posted by Totodile7:
Oh yeah, and after the 7th gym they take control of Lugia, and you have to stop them.
How do Team Rocket take control of Lugia? Why do they take control of Lugia? What do they want Lugia to accomplish?

Can you go into more detail about these points in addition to the rest of your idea? Right now there's not much I can do.
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