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Old February 8th, 2010, 08:38 AM
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Well the story needs to be worked on a bit more, and the mapping isnt good.
Try improving the story past just one sentence. Its kinda uninteresting as it is now. As far as the mapping goes, ther are no hills or mountains, everything is box like, all the tiles are way too repetitive and the maps just dont seem like pokemon at all. Looks rather rushed, kinda like how you rushed to those 15 posts
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