I am requesting beta for my fan fic, I finished my Prologue and haven't posted it yet, and now starting on Chapter 1
Title of Story: Crossing the Line
Plot summary: A ragtag team of Military Pokemon fighting to end a war against the Galactic-Rocket Alliance, that brought damage, fear, and large amount of pain through out the galaxy. Will they live and end the war, or will they fail and die.
Genre: Action, Comedy, War, Science Fiction (Somethings wont be possible in real life),Romance, Horror, Adventure
Rating (PG, R, etc): Rated PG-17 (swearing, alcohol reference, mature jokes)
Type of mentor needed: Grammer, Proof reading, Comprehensive, Language
Writing sample of story:
"You see...I own your ass" said Swampert, slowly reaching for his sword.
"I don't think so" he replied, doing a chinese get up and kicks Swampert in the stomach, launching him through a wall.
Poliwrath walks over his sword and picks it up then quickly runs to the smashed wall and looks around the room and sees debris and a open door.
He slowly turns around and walks towards the others
"Yo! Poliwrath did you get him?" asked Sceptile
"Yea, he escaped, but at least i kicked him through a wall" he replied.
"But he escaped, you totally suck, even I can do better" said Ditto.
"I can demote your ass just with a sword, and just with a sword"
"Okay...now I'm panicking"
Other: I have been writing for a year and a half now, and English is my main language but it seems like still have spelling and wording problems