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Old March 11th, 2010, 07:49 AM
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TrackerXNinjaX
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Johto
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Nature: Relaxed
I hate it when people dont reply, but dont get discouraged! I'm only sorry i didn't see this sooner.
Critique-I like the name. The story has promise, but i'd like to see some more added to it, like something to really grab the reader; a pokemon being stolen, a bomb threat, end of the universe, etc...
To get more people to reply, post some pictures of fakemon, the main characters, and the bad guys. It couldnt hurt!
I would help but i don't have RMXP, only AMAP..
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