Thread: [Pokémon] Caught In The Moment [PG-13]
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Old April 7th, 2010, 02:03 PM
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"Appreciates" is usually used in a positive nature though, regardless of definition :s That's why it's a bit confuzzling. Technically, it's correct in definition, but in regards to how it's comprehended in modern day, most people are only aware of the first definition. To be more clear to the average reader, though, I'd suggest changing it.

As for the "but", I guess we can look at it both ways.

If you want a dramatic pause, write "But, Derek!". If you want a sudden, abrupt cry, use "But Derek!".

Which are you intending? ^^ Due to the context, I prefer to read it as an abrupt cry of impatience, rather than dramatic, but it's your 'fic~
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