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Old April 16th, 2010 (01:14 PM).
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私はセクシーです
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Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: 'Merica
Gender: Male
Posts: 82
Um. I'm new here and this is my first post.

When I start a New Game:

-I think your game needs some music.
-Your punctuation needs some work.
-I wasn't able to take any other Pokemon other than Treeko. After I chose it, it allowed me to take Torchic.
-Your home town is called West City but the sign by the Trainer's Union said West Town.
-In West City, you can see a black area in the bottom-right corner
-I can walk through part of the PokeMart in West City
-I can walk through almost every building in West City
-You spelled inauguration wrong.
-Capitalization
-I can't go into the Teleporter room.

When I Choose Continue
-The levels in the cave are too high



It needs a lot of work.