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Old April 16th, 2010, 06:31 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2010
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Originally Posted by Sero View Post
Um. I'm new here and this is my first post.

When I start a New Game:

-I think your game needs some music.
-Your punctuation needs some work.
-I wasn't able to take any other Pokemon other than Treeko. After I chose it, it allowed me to take Torchic. I forgot to change it
-Your home town is called West City but the sign by the Trainer's Union said West Town. i made union first city last
-In West City, you can see a black area in the bottom-right corner i'm not good at planning
-I can walk through part of the PokeMart in West City oopps
-I can walk through almost every building in West City oopps times two
-You spelled inauguration wrong. i'm bad at spelling
-Capitalization i got an z- in LA
-I can't go into the Teleporter room. ??? weird

When I Choose Continue
-The levels in the cave are too high Well he does tell you to train...



It needs a lot of work.

i know!!
byt i am working all by my self here, i am lost at scripting, and i could not sprite to save my life...
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