Thread: [Pokémon] Pokémon: The Almia Conspiracy
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Old April 25th, 2010 (2:48 PM).
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Originally Posted by pokefan345 View Post
@darkpokeball, That's a nice idea. And, I proofed the first chapter according to Valentine's advice, so you should probably read it again.

@JK Valentine, I proofed my chapter according to your review, and I used your introduction, if that's alright.

And I'm still working on the second chapter!
I read it again, but again, it needs more detail. And how in the world does his name change from Zack Romano to Kyle?
My Chainsaw Meowth is currently missing! If you have a lead or think you know something, PLEASE PM ME! I am desperately searching, and I dread the possibility that I may never find him...
On a side note, if anybody can answer the following question right, then they get a mystery prize! *Must have a Gen V game to claim prize*
Question: What the heck did Jinora do in the finale?! I don't get it! I know 90% of you won't know what I'm talking about, but I need an answer!
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