Thread: [Pokémon] Pokémon: The Almia Conspiracy
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Old April 25th, 2010, 02:48 PM
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Originally Posted by pokefan345 View Post
@darkpokeball, That's a nice idea. And, I proofed the first chapter according to Valentine's advice, so you should probably read it again.

@JK Valentine, I proofed my chapter according to your review, and I used your introduction, if that's alright.

And I'm still working on the second chapter!
I read it again, but again, it needs more detail. And how in the world does his name change from Zack Romano to Kyle?
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