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Old May 18th, 2010 (12:06 PM).
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Kid Ghandi:
Unfortunately, you are denied.
It appears you have not read the Synopsis, as your SU states that your character came upon Lavaridge town at one point. Because this story takes place a very long time (Hundreds of thousands of years) after humanity's demise, a town like Lavaridge would not exist anymore. Please try to have a good understanding of a story before you post in an RP.
Also, your RP sample was written in mixed tenses and generally sloppy.

And perfectmonster, I'll keep you in mind.
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