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Old June 4th, 2010 (10:38 AM).
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Kipher
The author riding the raptor.
 
Join Date: May 2010
Location: South Ireland/ Currently Hartford CT.
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Nature: Calm
Quote:
She's the one. I'm sure of it. I look into her eyes and see into her soul, and I know. She's the most wonderful woman I've ever known. Her long, chestnut hair bobs gently up and down as we walk together with my hand clasped in her soft palm. Her face radiates joy and warmth and her voice is light and lyrical like birdsong.

At least, that's how I imagine it. It's not the same for her with me. She looks at me, with my straggly brown hair and spotty face and knows she can do so much better.

Ok thats one flaw there, form that unto one sentance or get rid of the " and I know."
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