[RMXP] Pokemon LunarVoid
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July 9th, 2010 (08:50 AM).
Join Date: Jul 2010
The plot seems kind of cliche BADGUYSOHNO, I think you should definitely put more thought into it. Everyone knows that once the bad guys announce their unbeatable plan, they're going to fail. I mean come on, its pretty obvious. Maybe the protagonist discovers the amalgamation in his quest. I don't think his adventure should be initiated by this.
Feel free to follow (or not) my advice
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