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Old July 26th, 2010, 09:09 PM
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I fixed those typos before I finished the story, but the document didn't save (And I write everything on Notepad, since I don't have a better word processor on my computer)

Anyway, the reason he dies is mostly because of the fact that he's really old, and that he was just so surprised.(Not to mention that after a huge enough war to destroy the world, there'd probably be all sorts of nasty stuff in the air(Something I just thought of now TBH...))

So yeah, I'll fix those despicable typos
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Last edited by Missingno.7-4468; July 26th, 2010 at 09:09 PM. Reason: Damn typos! >_>