Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Riolu's Adventure [VOLUME 6]
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August 6th, 2010 (12:49 PM).
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: fountain of dreams
The story could use a little more fixing up like,why is Hypno attempting to kill him? Why are there the disasters and how can you stop them by using the Power Ribbons?
The speed of the story is going too fast for me
I don't know why
but you should it down a bit. Volume 3 and 4 are also blurred causing the sprites and backgrounds to hurt my eyes. ):
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