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Old September 25th, 2010, 07:31 PM
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Originally Posted by Cypher DS View Post
The reason I'm asking these questions, Psynergist, is because there are some very odd moments popping up in the storyline.

-When Silver first meets Lance, they recognize each other and Silver boasts about how he previously defeated the dragon trainer. When did this happen?

-Immediately after, Lance tells Silver that he's looking for the Mask of Ice, and Silver says something to the effect of, "What, the Mask of Ice? You mean that jerk who stole my memories?! Let me at him!"
If Silver cannot remember his memories, how does he remember that he cannot remember?
Furthermore, when you later meet Green and Blue, Silver is suddenly clueless about the Mask of Ice, and has to ask the other trainers to explain who this villain is.

Oh, lol, I should fix that. He only remember's bits and pieces, or else he'd have no idea that he'd lost his memories. But, yeah, I agree, I need to fix the dialogue. Thanks for catching that for me.



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