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Pokemon Fire Red Omega (Yes, I'm shameless)
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October 1st, 2010 (4:02 PM).
I LP, and not much else.
Join Date: May 2010
Location: The tiny country inbetween France and The Netherlands.
This LP could be improved on. A lot of your jokes fall flat because they're very predictable, or have been done a lot already. You have very few images as well - didn't even capture a single part of the conversation with Oak and Gary in the lab.
Also, but these may just be personal preferences, I wouldn't have picked a starter before asking the readers which one they want. I also wouldn't announce what I'm going to catch in the next update, that just ruins the surprise.
That aside, I do appreciate the fact that you're using proper English and no immature jokes. I'm sure this LP could be better if you put some work into it.
Thanks to インフェルノの津波 for the sig.
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