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Old November 20th, 2010, 01:59 AM
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You really need to elaborate far more, it's ridiculous to post a string of one-sentence paragraphs and call it a 'review'. While you may be getting your basic point across you aren't doing a very good job at arguing these points, which is the reason for a review to be written - to try to persuade your reader to your point of view using facts.
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