Do you mind if I do a draw-over in the next couple of days to help you out?
other than that, I love the composition and the clothes look really good!
Thanks. Sure, I don't mind at all. I've actually been trying to get help on it.
If you need it, here's the non-colored, non-shaded lineart: http://karite-kita-neko.deviantart.com/art/Yuki-Onna-Line-Art-186819276
Thanks again, and thanks in advance!