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Old December 6th, 2010 (01:40 AM).
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Tomackze
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Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: New York
Age: 23
Gender: Male
@angel. Almost accepted, your aspirations and personality should be a little longer. But I like where you are going with it.

I'll give you the pokemon though as soon as you finish it.

@dragonite149, really like where you are going with it. Good start. Aspirations should get longer and everything else should be longer also.

Basically Charzeon's is a decent start if you post an SU. The aspirations and personality are a little on the short side but I gave Charzeon a break being the first to complete it. I like more for aspirations and more for personality...

The aspirations can include stuff which makes me see why you'd want the legendary that you are trying to get... The personality can have stuff like that too... or the starter pokemon? The background history should be the longest, and that is a good length IMO, but the others should be a little longer
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