The Thinking Man's Guide to Destroying the World
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February 7th, 2011, 04:53 AM
Oatmeal? Are you CRAZY?!
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: In the middle of nowhere.
Hi again! I finally finished reading Chapter Ten, and when I returned, you had put up TWO new chapters and made my week!
Just a side note, your description of Metagross literally sent shivers down my spine. You are
. I would like to marry you and bear your children. (...figuratively.)
Also, I have one criticism. I don't have a lot of time here, and I can't go back and see exactly where, but there is more than one instance where you used the word "span" as the past-tense of "spin". The word "span" means something different altogether, and the word you are looking for is "spun". It's a minor mistake, but I felt that it needed to be pointed out.
Anyway, I can't wait to read the rest of your story!
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