February 9th, 2011, 05:40 AM
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A Pokémon Poet
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Join Date: Jul 2009
Age: 19
Gender:
Male 
Nature: Jolly
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The story is pretty nice. Especially since I'm anticipating Pokémon Black and White a lot!
Some capitalization would help make the poem a bit more neat. Also some punctuation.
But since you're obviously a beginner at poetry (are you?) I'll go easy on this one.
Nice work.
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