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Old February 9th, 2011 (11:55 AM).
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Quote originally posted by theowlmanlives:
Yeah, I'm pretty new to poetry. There was more to the poem but it faded before i could write it down.

I'm gonna try a Pikachu poem I made when I was young but have been trying to improve. (once again I know this is not good)

Pikachu

Oh Pikachu, Mouse of lightning,
You are so determined when you're fighting,
When times are hard you don't surrender:
Oh Pikachu, your lightning's defender
I like this poem, it's short and sweet

Quote:
Oh Pikachu, your lightning's defender
But in this line shouldn't it be 'you're lightning's defender' instead of your?
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