View Single Post
February 9th, 2011 (01:33 PM).
Your aquatic overlord
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Harassing Bill
Slightly abrasive side note (hope you don't mind or anything):
But in this line shouldn't it be 'you're lightning's defender' instead of your?
Tip: If you're going to correct someone's grammar, please go all the way to avoid having a line
be grammatically incorrect after your suggestions.
That being said, you're still missing something there. Namely, the line would have to read "you are
lightning defender" to avoid something that sounds like Engrish. "You are lightning defender" doesn't make sense on its own.
Will probably come back to submit an actual review to this thread later.
Also, it's called an Emolga.
Professional ninja. May or may not actually be back. Here for the snark and banter at most.
Need some light reading?
Anima Ex Machina
(Chapter 20 now available)
The Leaf Green Incident
(SWC 2012 winner)
Also Known As:
View Public Profile
Send a private message to JX Valentine
Visit JX Valentine's homepage!
Find all posts by JX Valentine
Find threads started by JX Valentine
Ignore Posts by JX Valentine