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Old February 13th, 2011 (3:13 AM). Edited February 13th, 2011 by Cutlerine.
Cutlerine Cutlerine is offline
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Thank you for your review, bobandbill. Character interaction actually really isn't that difficult to do for this. I model all the dialogue on my own interactions with my friends, and that's why they're believable. By happy coincidence, this also makes them funny, since I hold that the main purpose of conversation is the entertaining bouncing back and forth of ideas.

As for the other little things you mentioned - I'll get right on those. Thanks for pointing them out.

Oh yes, and Chapter Six is actually slightly shorter than most of the other chapters. I'm not sure why it feels so long; perhaps it's because it begins with a battle and doesn't end when the action does.

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