Thread: [Pokémon] dragons winter
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Old February 15th, 2011, 04:28 PM
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Huh. I've read the next ten chapters now - the plot seems to be getting more and more contrived. First we find that Andrew the "Rayquaza" was being chased by a bunch of guys with poison arrows just because he had that sort of metamorphic ability.

Then we find out Andrew is actually a Kyogre, which isn't really known for being able to transform into any Pokémon it's made contact with. As well, a Lugia has made her hideout where the evil men are, and they haven't found her this whole time? Seems a bit improbable.

The scenes themselves were okay for what they were, though - Andrew treating the Latios of poison, the folks with the arrows mistreating Latias and all that...
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