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March 1st, 2011, 07:31 AM
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Join Date: May 2009
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Thanks for the review
I think i've gotten better at stating and describing emotions in the later chapters but it's definitely something i'll look into for future reference. And in regards to Alex and his Dad calling Felina by their last name, I briefly mentioned it around chapter 12 ( I think) In Felina And The Bird, where Alex states that his sister had always hated her forename.
Thanks for continuing to read, and I look forward to any future comments!
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