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Old March 24th, 2011 (9:32 PM). Edited March 24th, 2011 by Anna.
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Spoiler:
> Anyone else think "Nacrene" sounds weird?
> "Cilan" still sounds odd :(
> Ash and Cilan stare blankly at nothing for a few seconds. :/
> Iris shut up you haven't tasted the amazingness that is Cilan-- I mean, Cilan's cooking. Yeah.
> "I'm so happy that you're enjoying it." Sounds awkward and slightly condescending.
> Backhanded complement is totally over Ash's head.
> Just noticed the shaking grass is reminiscent of the games.
> You know I'm not even gonna complain about the theme anymore. It isn't gonna change anytime soon. :/
> You know I just find it odd that people in-universe say "starter Pokemon". I mean so many people start off with like... Yorterrie and Chillarmy, I'm sure. Or even Yabukuron.
> Why the random "Awesome" thrown in the middle of a sentence?
> Cilan the encyclopedia.
> SHUT UP IRIS ONLY AK47 LIKES YOU
> Snivy sounds super feminine. Makes me wonder about later things.
> "I wonder.... .... ... if it abandoned .... its trainer!" What's up with the massive pauses? :/
> "What does that mean?" ARE YOU FOR REAL?!
> Why do you laugh at the pain of Pokemon, Ash? D:
> James you just love to show off with your big words.
> "It's a Snivy! Yes!" ...Affirming your own statement?
> Slash? Looks a hell of a lot like fury swipes to me...
> Iris. He has a perfectly good reason for what he does. SHUT UP.
> That Pokemon is Snivy. <3
> This bgm. It is new.
> Your misplaced confidence is cute, Cilan.
> "Win the Unova League" just sounds awkward.


Wow. Lots of the dialogue sounds very awkward. And there are lots of random pauses.
Good news is Cilan's voice is getting better.

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