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Old April 10th, 2011 (9:52 AM).
Cilerba Cilerba is offline
the hearts of lonely people
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Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Massachusetts
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Nature: Quiet
Posts: 1,168
Your mapping could definitely improve a bit more, everything seems so crowded. When making maps you need to focus on the gameplay and make sure it's easy for the player to walk through those maps.

Your grammar is another thing that could improve. Things like "I'm going to search my dad," and "Will you come back sometimes?" don't make much sense.

Other than that, I'm definitely looking forward to see some more updates.