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April 10th, 2011, 09:52 AM
the hearts of lonely people
Join Date: Feb 2010
Your mapping could definitely improve a bit more, everything seems so crowded. When making maps you need to focus on the gameplay and make sure it's easy for the player to walk through those maps.
Your grammar is another thing that could improve. Things like "I'm going to search my dad," and "Will you come back sometimes?" don't make much sense.
Other than that, I'm definitely looking forward to see some more updates.
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