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April 15th, 2011, 06:46 AM
Join Date: Jun 2009
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The tiles were made by Alucus, and the RMXP format tilesets were made by neo-spriteman.
Then credit them in the OP.
Badder: More bad than before cause of something strange
Destroyed: Uhh.. that meaning is for 1-year old. Uhh... They Destroy Twinleaf Town.
No. That's not what I meant. Your plot doesn't make any logical sense. Read it and rewrite it so it actually means something. For instance, who destroyed Twinleaf? The dragons? Team Galactic? Both of them? "Starting by the dark day", "were not knowing" aren't English. Just, yeah. Please.
And, for the record, "badder" isn't a word. You mean "worse".
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