May 5th, 2011, 11:56 AM
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Master of Palettes
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Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Great Britain
Age: 19
Gender:
Male 
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Hey Atomic! Finally posting on here.
I've already commented on all of the graphics on DA, so I'll just comment on the story here.
The first part seems pretty standard, but I'm sure you'll expand on it. The alternative universe idea sounds cool, will you be transported there? Having a tournament instead of the elite four also sounds good.
Overall really good, so keep it up and make sure you finish it 
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