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May 6th, 2011 (08:01 PM).
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Join Date: May 2006
Location: Dani California
In his experience, dreams were notoriously unreliable informants. The last dream Ren remembered having was the one with the Glameow with an afro. The feline Pokemon had led him through a maze of candy canes and lollipops before finally turning on him and trying to eat him.
That dream cracked me up, LOL.
I actually like the conversation between Bella and Ren. Already I’m liking her as a character. :3 It’s very nice that the two will be friends. And I have to agree with Richard being enthusiastic there.
Ack, sorry for the short review. D: I’m sure though the next chapter will be great, so hopefully my next review will be better, haha.
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