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Old May 8th, 2011 (06:36 AM).
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Marina E. Silver
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Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Kanto
Gender: Female
Nature: Bashful
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Great Story bro . I love the story and you're great at writing characters. I can easily understand their personalities . I like the action you put in chapter three and we've already discussed what I think of Wade.

As for Zed I think he's a good villain and you've done a great job with his character.

All else I can say is keep writing
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