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Old May 14th, 2011, 10:30 AM
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Daedalus
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Canada, BC
Age: 20
It's always nice to see something that isn't Pokemon in this section, but this needs a bit of work...
  • You should remove the watermark. You didn't make the sprites, and as poe said, this can be done in paint.
  • The background for the loading screen and play screen are a bit distracting. Lower the saturation?
  • The text on these backgrounds are really tacky. I suggest making a logo or something instead.
  • There really isn't enough sprites to really do much of anything.
  • ...Music? Is this necessary? Maybe mute it by default and then let the user unmute it if they want to hear it?
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